Enjoyable, but predictable. The animation was good, the voice acting pretty solid, concept works. Well made and comprehensive, you probably got a good mark for is.
The only gripe I actually have with it is all the people getting butthurt about the 'slanted' viewpoint.
No shit, Sherlock. It's over the top, absurd and patently not 100% true. Do you know why?
Oh, yes, right. Satire. That's a thing on the internet now, apparently.
Not exactly prime work.
You get a two for effort. But there is EVERYTHING wrong with this.
First off, peoples hands and head need to move semi-independantly from the body. Animations need to be smooth and not jump quickly. The backgrounds need to fit the screen size, or vice versa.
It needs to be longer, it needs to have actual recoil when the guns are fired and it needs feet. It needs to be more than a few half-assed days worth of on-and-off work.
Flash. Takes. Time. This is terrible.
Traced, and barely worth the title of animation.
It's a good gun, and I'll give it that. Not the drawing, but the actual gun. But that's all I really can give it. It's not worth sticking in an animation for two reasons:
It's just a gun beign drawn. It's very, very short, and that's it.
You've never heard of curving lines. The only curves are on the premade circles, and the prevalence of straight lines is jarring.
Learn to curve lines and don't trace it. Then, stick the finished product in the Art portal. This shouldn't really be animated.
Same as the first
Blocks falling, increasingly faster dodging, he breaks some blocks and a robot tries to kill him. But the robot this time was overly detailed in teh making, and pretty lousy in action, to be honest. It waved its arms for a bit and then grew some rocket boosters. Yay?
It's just a sequel riding on the glory of the first. Reminds me or Disney, to be honest. Anyway, I guess taking the same script and remaking it as a 'sequel' works for you, I mean look at the 4.40 score! But it's still crap.
WTFish, but with a lol factor. Also, its memes, not themes.
Props to you, my man.
That's a good fluid animation.
+ It was indeed the most fluid stick animation I have seen for a while.
+ It wasn't too long. Nice simple concept, nice short illiustration.
+ The Idea is hardly a knew one, but its still orchestrated very well.
+ The animation was in sync, the telekenetic guys arm movements almost exactlc corresponded with the reaction of the guy.
-Quality was pretty bad. And dont tell me that it's because its imported, because its quite easy to make it smooth looking.
-The blood was badly done, no more that a bunch of lines. and seeing the way you did the blast at the end, you are more than capable of doing blood spurts.
-You put "this is my fourth video, so please be nice. " in the description. Don't say that, it sounds pathetic.
What did you tweak in flash?
How long did it take to make?
Overall, nice work indeed for a forth vid. Check my stuff! And consider animating soley in flash, its fun.
Look, I'll give you props for animating decently, and having a v-cam, and actually using the sprites and sounds properly, but the fact still remains that it's madness. Normally, i'm the biggest fan, but after seeing so many different madnesses, it gets old. And after seeing your attempt at a speech bubble, i do doubt that you have real drawing talent.
There is no excuse for being 12. There is no difference between a 12 year old animator and an 18 year old animator. You still animate the same, since skill and age are not really entwined.
Also, if you are 12, you shouldn't be on NG, but whatever, I don't care. So, aside from the fact that it was madness, it's neat. I commend you for animating at 30 frames, which is more than I can do, but it's still madness.
Also, you must CREDIT your music sources. Provide LINKS. Tata, keep working on that flash.
Quite frankly, it's laughable.
Its your first straightfoward animation, it seems, no databasing involved. It was all tweened, wasnt it? I hate tweening. Really, go eat a pie. The weapons were okay, but the filters used sucked, they were overused. I has critical breakdown.
It's my first strait-forward animation submitted to newgrounds =)
Well, i suck at fbf and this wasn't a real attempt at good flash.
Sorry you didn't like the filters =)
I'ma give this a 1 for the potential, but for crying out loud! Every time I see one of these movies, it depresses me. They spam, take away perfectly good titles, and disappoint loads of people. What's worse is the fact that you obviously have loads of potential, the artwork is good, and the animation, what little there was, seemed okay.
And for all you rubbernecked fools out there who believe this is stolen, who the FUCK would steal this, and its obviously not stolen, just worthless spams.
need a dispenser here
This is damn awesome
All those people who say this is stolen can go suck a whale dick. Have youchecked this guys OTHER stuff? The animation style is the same, and he provides perfectl;y legitimate reasons as to why the sound quality was crap. So shut the fuck up.
Excellent everything. 10/10, 5ed every day.
Keep the steamwork rolling.
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.